In the following entries, I've placed each station so that it is easier to manage, edit and comment on.
Call to adventure
Adari born, pavis lives among the elves in the vale of flowers. He leaves the empire to seek answers to his true nature with his companion flintnail and the openhandists.
Doesn't want to go
rejects EWF for forcing obedience
"If only they would ask me nicely to surgically alter my tongue and mess with my mind."
First trial
Survive Desert
Pavis finds ruins of Robcradle & Green Age power
Pavis tries to compromise with Thog
Thog refuses
They try to escape
Flintnail & followers captured
"Find the Faceless Statue on his throne in Dagori Inkarth"
Pavis escapes
Travel to Dagori Inkarth
Proves he means no harm
worked with troll mother to bolster her status
by having a healthy child.
This child is, of course, Gerak Kag.
Awakening the Statue
Dangerous procedure, involves mating
On the throne:
"Who am I to do anything at all?
What use is any action in a world without love?"
Symbolizes the arising of the statue
The ancients say the statue denied love
Pavis recognizes that it denied the validity of a world without love
Second Threshold
Pavis is now a power, yet must flee the dark
New powers & old rally around & against
Trolls of various clans on both sides
Dwarfs, EWF, Zorak Zoran, Chaos Beasts are all possible
With the appearance of an unexpected ally, Pavis leaves Shadows Dance and recrosses the desert to come before the walls of Pavis.
A Bloody Handed Warrior makes an appearance.
Black Moment/Dark Night
A vision of the city in ruins/under siege then destroyed in darkness.
Pavis loses hope for a day and a night
He regrets loss of Flintnail, is spurred to action.
Searching for Flintnail, Pavis & statue approach wall
discovers Flintnail is not dead
Flintnail has a message of hope
Thog refuses to return Flintnail or to hand over the city.
- THIRD THRESHOLD Action and sacrifice.
- The Too Tall Battle begins as the faceless statue crosses Thog's walls. Waha and the nomads fight along side the giant. Joraz aids Pavis.
- Resurrection
After the battle, the Faceless Statue's energies end and it crumbles. Pavis swears that the statue will live on in his city, and that another Statue will sit at the Throne in the future. Everyone there sees this as true.
- Incorporation
Pavis distributes his blessings and the wealth of the new city to all his allies, beginning to build his city.
- FOURTH THRESHOLD Freedom to Live
- Pavis makes peace with his enemy Waha, assuring the survival of his city. Pavis establishes the rules of what will be the Perfect City.
I suggest that anyone with an expansion of any line of the above just post it here.
Call to adventure
Adari born, pavis lives among the elves in the vale of flowers. He leaves the empire to seek answers to his true nature with his companion flintnail and the openhandists.
Doesn't want to go
rejects EWF for forcing obedience
"If only they would ask me nicely to surgically alter my tongue and mess with my mind."
First trial
Survive Desert
Pavis finds ruins of Robcradle & Green Age power
Pavis tries to compromise with Thog
Thog refuses
They try to escape
Flintnail & followers captured
"Find the Faceless Statue on his throne in Dagori Inkarth"
Pavis escapes
Travel to Dagori Inkarth
Proves he means no harm
worked with troll mother to bolster her status
by having a healthy child.
This child is, of course, Gerak Kag.
Awakening the Statue
Dangerous procedure, involves mating
On the throne:
"Who am I to do anything at all? What use is any action in a world without love?"
Symbolizes the arising of the statue
The ancients say the statue denied love
Pavis recognizes that it denied the validity of a world without love
Second Threshold
Pavis is now a power, yet must flee the dark
New powers & old rally around & against
Trolls of various clans on both sides
Dwarfs
EWF
Zorak Zoran
Chaos Beasts are all possible
With the appearance of an unexpected ally, Pavis leaves Shadows Dance and recrosses the desert to come before the walls of Pavis.
A Bloody Handed Warrior makes an appearance.
Black Moment/Dark Night
A vision of the city in ruins/under siege then destroyed in darkness.
Pavis loses hope for a day and a night
He regrets loss of Flintnail, is spurred to action.
Searching for Flintnail, Pavis & statue approach wall
discovers Flintnail is not dead
Flintnail has a message of hope
Thog refuses to return Flintnail or to hand over the city.
- THIRD THRESHOLD Action and sacrifice.
- The Too Tall Battle begins as the faceless statue crosses Thog's walls. Waha and the nomads fight along side the giant. Joraz aids Pavis.
- Resurrection
After the battle, the Faceless Statue's energies end and it crumbles. Pavis swears that the statue will live on in his city, and that another Statue will sit at the Throne in the future. Everyone there sees this as true.
- Incorporation
Pavis distributes his blessings and the wealth of the new city to all his allies, beginning to build his city.
- FOURTH THRESHOLD Freedom to Live
- Pavis makes peace with his enemy Waha, assuring the survival of his city. Pavis establishes the rules of what will be the Perfect City.