Fleet Foot Seigdisud
Haragalan Sailor, Reoh “fleetfoot” Seigdisud, son of Garavee “foretopman”, is wanted on Esijutine Isle for rescuing his sister, Yirput, from Prince Vile Tramices. Disguised, he stays a step ahead of Esijutinian agents and throws them off his trail with his family’s shifting winds spirits. Trading helps him woo BubblinaSilverfin. Giving gifts to her and Lumavoxoran Priests increases his social status. Despite his ugliness, he charms people with sea stories, songs and sailor’s dances his father taught him.
Skills from the description as opposed to keywords:
Rescue captive
Hunted by Prince Vile
Disguise
Relationship with sister
Stay a Step Ahead
Hunted by Esijutinian Agents (See next entry)
Obscure Trail
Shifting Wind Spirits
Relationship with Family
Trade
Woo
Gifts (maybe Wealth?)
Gift Giver?
Contributor to Priests of Lumavoxoran
Higher Social Status
Ugly
Charming
Sea Stories
Sea Songs
Sailor's Dances
Relationship with Father
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thoughts and tweaks
Keywords: Sailor, East Isles/Haragala
No mention of magic keyword, unless he worships his family wind spirits, in which case they should have a name--a god, tradition or school of sorcery or a Common Magic religion. Mike’s thoughts on this description:
75 words with a couple tweaks that didn’t change meanings at all.
Instead of “Esijutian Agents” how about some vague but cool sounding organization name like “Grey Seas Foam Hounds” or “Ironwood Island Leapers”?
You mention his father twice.